Re: My Dark Power by The Martyr	10-May-03/11:36 AM
That makes the two of us.
Re: a comment on The boy who shot birds by Bachus	10-May-03/11:33 AM
I don't think three of your poems are shit. I believe all of them to be shit. Whether you are twelve or 32 or ten, 6, 600. It's irrelevant, because, you can't spell, your poetry is pointlessly self absorbed and ridiculous, your grammar is shite! And beyond all of that you have no grasp of poetry, art, or what it is you're trying to spit out of that void between your ears called the human mind. Congradulations, I hope you can skate for a day job?
Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause) by The Martyr	9-May-03/7:53 PM
For Palestine West Virginia's favoutite vagina Laci Peterson.
Re: Untitled by js560000	9-May-03/7:50 PM
Metallica, did it better and bolder.
Re: a comment on blockbuster by bondjedi	9-May-03/3:14 PM
You do.
Re: a comment on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8	9-May-03/3:10 PM
http://gangbox.com/mp3/Birth%20in%20the%20valley%20of.mp3 Here's a better comment for you to skate board too. I would of taken the time to read your comment if it wasn't completely assanine and reeking of contempt and chirpes.
Re: a comment on Black Buns by Bachus	9-May-03/2:58 PM
I didn't ask. And I haven't a clue, or do I give a shit as to what in the fuck you are yammering about! how about you read the 39 comments above yours and chirp to those people, thanks! Art and poetry are two different things entirely by the way (unless you are writing concrete poems or da-da). Good luck on your search!
Re: 2 by psikosis	9-May-03/12:22 PM
Change tyme to thyme and brings to flings.
Re: Emoticon by psikosis	9-May-03/12:20 PM
Good Question! Horrible poem.
Re: Cabin by the lake by psikosis	9-May-03/12:18 PM
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
Re: My final poem by lee's tommy	9-May-03/12:05 PM
Shit.
Re: Sanctuary by Lolly	9-May-03/12:02 PM
I would change thin to thick, really. 9. (this was the best poem i've read in a bit, probably the last 30 congradulations)
Re: Trichomanic Sexless Bitch by superskunky1	9-May-03/11:58 AM
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
Re: a comment on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8	1-May-03/10:52 PM
And the my fingers? Are a big time 'a one bigtime longy chicky jew wongy' trust in that if say the cereal box goes a tilt gone.
Re: a comment on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8	1-May-03/10:50 PM
I change every day and every way. I have the my fingers around the neck of infinity.
Re: moments lost in adversity by brazen	29-Apr-03/12:41 AM
You make me feel guilty, and I wash my hands a lot?
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/12:38 AM
Necronomicon Death, madness and Cthulu. Let's swallow some souls.
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/12:34 AM
"On this day, I have found fear..." Ahbdul Alhazar 'the mad arab'. (from the Necronomicon)
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/12:31 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!! what? You're kidding right? lol. I'll bring the greater and lesser key of Solomon just in case.
Re: 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217	26-Apr-03/8:30 PM
sepulchral, or sepulcher, but not what you have, because it's not a word. Other then that, there are about ten grammaric goof ups and a couple other typos, but it's the thought that counts.