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Emoticon (Free verse) by psikosis
Anger bottled up, boiling over into life. Hasty decisions bring me strife. Let me pummel you with my knife. Out of control, destiny is far away. Scrutiny is within my reach. Your words ring hollow, emptiness inside of me. Not sure where to turn, and for you I do yearn. What other lessons must I lean? Push it all down, deep inside. Like a volcano, sure to blow. After all, Who can know?

Up the ladder: ...
Down the ladder: Bruce Lee is a Lotus Ninja

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.523188
Overall Rank: 12750
Posted: May 9, 2003 10:16 AM PDT; Last modified: May 9, 2003 10:16 AM PDT
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[3] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-May-03/12:20 PM | Reply
Good Question! Horrible poem.
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