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Free verse № 48835

Emoticon

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 May 2003 · 1 comment

Anger bottled up, boiling over into life. Hasty decisions bring me strife. Let me pummel you with my knife. Out of control, destiny is far away. Scrutiny is within my reach. Your words ring hollow, emptiness inside of me. Not sure where to turn, and for you I do yearn. What other lessons must I lean? Push it all down, deep inside. Like a volcano, sure to blow. After all, Who can know?

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[3] Bachus 9-May-03/12:20 PM Reply
Good Question! Horrible poem.