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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya perfection
complete
truely unique
you are my vision
of perfect sweet
never
did eye ever
think
eye could find
another more perfect
then you
grace my eyes
and in that one second
time and space
stood still
how do eye know
you ask
cause eye'm there
still
never to leave
never to go
for you are my friend
to thee end
thee other half
of my whole
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Posted: November 5, 2002 10:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2002 10:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.523188 Overall Rank: 12744 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.92
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6-Nov-02/6:09 AM
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'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.
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