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Untitled (Free verse) by nopal
Baggy jeans, baggy shirts, big long chains Music no on hears??? Remember what they said: Say no! be careful???of what? Hidden walls in forests ??? spray paint cans by the ton, And smoking cigarettes Run, run way???be careful! You???re not from here: Foreign kids, foreign language Equals strange, unwanted. But I had fun, and they???ll never know??? Confusion, they???ll never know, Be happy, be fake They???ll never know what you wanted, what you say. Follow your heart, go home. Grow, change, grow, see, listen, Follow your heart, They???ll never know

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.523188
Overall Rank: 12748
Posted: September 30, 2002 11:45 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 11:45 AM PDT
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