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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

perfection complete truely unique you are my vision of perfect sweet never did eye ever think eye could find another more perfect then you grace my eyes and in that one second time and space stood still how do eye know you ask cause eye'm there still never to leave never to go for you are my friend to thee end thee other half of my whole

Tintagiles 6-Nov-02/6:09 AM
'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.




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