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Untitled (Free verse) by js560000
I've got nothing else to lose I will let you turn me inside out
all my life has found its meaning
walking, crawling, climbing, falling
I feel so alone From all I've become
I'll take you down I'll feel so down
I'm the water while you drown
You lifted me while I was down
I wish I was a sacrifice but somehow still lived on
I wish I was a sentimental ornament you hung on to
I wish I was the verb 'to trust' and never let you down
I Can't Remember Anything
Can't Tell If this Is True or Dream
Deep down Inside I Feel to Scream
this Terrible Silence Stops Me
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 11991
Posted: May 9, 2003 5:57 PM PDT; Last modified: May 9, 2003 5:57 PM PDT
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