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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
Read with caution!
evil dogs (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
could i make it all up to you would someone make you talk or walk or write something with chalk i spent the night with a boy a little boy from the bronx his mother was a junkie his father was a trash man is it up to me to be who says who has it together? depends on the mood and the food oh and and the wood in your hood i saw you first you were the first one tonight. if the beastie boys got together with ben folds would someone play the piano? would someone ride in the ghetto little boys dance nicely.

Up the ladder: Untitled
Down the ladder: emotional cliche

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 11987
Posted: June 9, 2003 10:11 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2003 10:11 PM PDT
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[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jun-03/12:46 AM | Reply
The end does a whistling Pete, but 'if' it's yours, it's not terribly bad. 7.
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