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emotional cliche (Free verse) by nolan
emotions are cliches
but tear us all
so used.... so broken..... so good???
never felt like this
but never felt the same
........so what?
i feel this way?
the same way as 6 billion others
i feel and feel
but so do they
i am not orignal
i am a conformist
to what you call love
lost and losing
your eyes... been used.... but loved
the sky... beautiful but old
the sun.... so you listen to flyod
my ears..... mozarts first
i am not an artist, i copy what i see
i am not a visualist i see what i hear
i am not a listener because shes not there
i looked up cliches for dummies
and talked to the silence
crying until i laughed
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Posted: June 9, 2003 10:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2003 10:55 PM PDT
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