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emotional cliche (Free verse) by nolan
emotions are cliches but tear us all so used.... so broken..... so good??? never felt like this but never felt the same ........so what? i feel this way? the same way as 6 billion others i feel and feel but so do they i am not orignal i am a conformist to what you call love lost and losing your eyes... been used.... but loved the sky... beautiful but old the sun.... so you listen to flyod my ears..... mozarts first i am not an artist, i copy what i see i am not a visualist i see what i hear i am not a listener because shes not there i looked up cliches for dummies and talked to the silence crying until i laughed

Up the ladder: evil dogs
Down the ladder: Advise

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 11988
Posted: June 9, 2003 10:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2003 10:55 PM PDT
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[5] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jun-03/12:49 AM | Reply
You should laugh.
[n/a] nolan @ 65.93.24.70 > Shardik | 6-Aug-03/1:03 AM | Reply
i am now
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