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Untitled (Free verse) by js560000

I've got nothing else to lose I will let you turn me inside out all my life has found its meaning walking, crawling, climbing, falling I feel so alone From all I've become I'll take you down I'll feel so down I'm the water while you drown You lifted me while I was down I wish I was a sacrifice but somehow still lived on I wish I was a sentimental ornament you hung on to I wish I was the verb 'to trust' and never let you down I Can't Remember Anything Can't Tell If this Is True or Dream Deep down Inside I Feel to Scream this Terrible Silence Stops Me

Bachus 9-May-03/7:50 PM
Metallica, did it better and bolder.




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