poemranker ::Trichomanic Sexless Bitch by superskunky1

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Free verse № 48857

Trichomanic Sexless Bitch

by superskunky1

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 May 2003 · 3 comments

As the miasma from your smoke provokes me to choke thoughts of distaste are all I contemplate Before a calm countenance After words were minced Though I could not conjure how you had me convinced the possibility of living a lie but smoke without sex I'd rather die.

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[7] Bachus 9-May-03/11:58 AM Reply
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
[n/a] superskunky1 › Bachus 9-May-03/1:30 PM Reply
1st poem ever...made it in 3 minutes..sorry it was sub par!
[10] wordho 9-May-03/12:58 PM Reply
dude, pretty wicked gyno-rage. did some chick mess up your laura ashley sheets?. if so, was it worth it?