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Trichomanic Sexless Bitch (Free verse) by superskunky1

As the miasma from your smoke provokes me to choke thoughts of distaste are all I contemplate Before a calm countenance After words were minced Though I could not conjure how you had me convinced the possibility of living a lie but smoke without sex I'd rather die.

Bachus 9-May-03/11:58 AM
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.




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