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Cabin by the lake (Free verse) by psikosis
I've tilled the soil, my underwater garden awaits you. Planting fresh crops, harvesting sweet skin. I choose very carefully, All who enter will see. Childhood memories are painful now, seeking revenge on pitiful sows. I've tilled the soil, my underwater garden awaits your sweet body.

Up the ladder: Sing to the Past

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6388
Posted: May 9, 2003 10:18 AM PDT; Last modified: May 9, 2003 10:18 AM PDT
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-May-03/12:18 PM | Reply
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
[n/a] QUENDO @ 195.157.153.253 | 29-May-03/2:50 AM | Reply
Very Welsh
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