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Free verse № 48836

Cabin by the lake

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 May 2003 · 2 comments

I've tilled the soil, my underwater garden awaits you. Planting fresh crops, harvesting sweet skin. I choose very carefully, All who enter will see. Childhood memories are painful now, seeking revenge on pitiful sows. I've tilled the soil, my underwater garden awaits your sweet body.

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[7] Bachus 9-May-03/12:18 PM Reply
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
[n/a] QUENDO 29-May-03/2:50 AM Reply
Very Welsh