| Re: No Tomorrow by mikehi |
17-Jun-03/5:19 PM |
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You should be more concerned about today.
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| Re: Seven by Dangzter |
15-Jun-03/5:21 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Seven by Dangzter |
15-Jun-03/5:14 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Seven by Dangzter |
15-Jun-03/5:13 PM |
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Master, I meant to be rid of all the enbrowned attire lying about before crossing paths with you again, I do appologize, please forgive me. I had planned on surprising you later with lilac wine and tarts in the gazeebo.
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| Re: One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl |
12-Jun-03/3:54 PM |
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What would you do to it if I put it in your hand?
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| Re: a comment on The rock star and the ATM by Shardik |
12-Jun-03/1:54 PM |
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At your age who cares, if you are only fifteen you have nothing to lose. Because James, I gurantee, you are not the next Rimbaud, so submit your poems. I'm 28, I will read your 15 year old poetry taking into account that you are fifteen, you have my word, but rest assured if it's shit I will laugh James, I will cackle madly because that's why I personally come to poemranker James, to cackle nude and to read your shit to feel cleaner in reading my shit.
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| Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard |
12-Jun-03/1:42 PM |
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yeah, if it was labeled an ode and not a sonnet.
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| Re: The rock star and the ATM by Shardik |
12-Jun-03/1:40 PM |
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Yes, James, I agree that must be why my fish tank whistles three times a day for tea and my house is made of scoria. I'm in HELL! Good god and I thought those were just ugly talking birds shitting on my patio umbrella?
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| Re: drops of blood in the wind by crwncka1 |
12-Jun-03/1:36 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The rock star and the ATM by Shardik |
12-Jun-03/1:27 PM |
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Also, significant lack of character is an understatement James. It shows plenty of character out of lack of any character, just not in that midwestern "hey ya'll let's be cock suckers and blow smoke up eachother's ass psuedo poets, and weekend poets (because that's what you and your friends are James)" way you and your friends are used to. But once again let's take a look at where we are at James. poemranker.com. I don't specificly see a bumpersticker on this 'vehicle of poetical rankings' that states "but be especially nice if they are especially stupid" do you asshole?
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| Re: a comment on The rock star and the ATM by Shardik |
12-Jun-03/1:20 PM |
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Go fuck your mom's face with potato peeler James. Submit or shut up outsider. Or put your money where your mouth is. Maybe your friends should go write at stillsuckingmomstit.com or you should start your own website called hi i'm Jame's John K.s older brother, and I do not have a blowjob super glued to my chin that's my Hummel collection.
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| Re: The rock star and the ATM by Shardik |
12-Jun-03/1:16 PM |
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Go fuck your mom's face with potato peeler James. Submit or shut up outsider.
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| Re: a comment on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
11-Jun-03/2:03 PM |
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Why'd you pull your poem down? Don't you want to learn?
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| Re: Liar by Babigurly69 |
8-Jun-03/2:23 PM |
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You are, YOU ARE! not "your". "Your a typical guy" So are you, isn't that keen, also, once again "your" is you're, idiot.
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| Re: Mommy Dearest by Babigurly69 |
8-Jun-03/2:20 PM |
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| Re: Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
8-Jun-03/2:15 PM |
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God's wife is to Dickerson, what your mouth is to Dickormouth. By the way I hate William Blake almost as much as I hate you fuck nose.
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| Re: a comment on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/5:21 PM |
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's with "s, sorry to be cryptic with that typo, here it is'only' work if the words didn't happen in real life.lol.
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| Re: a comment on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/5:19 PM |
Reading you is always my pleasure. What I meant was replacing the ''s with "'s and just a few other minor tweaks here and there, but as always you are spot on with imaginative depiction, and creating a vivid lirerary landscape for the reader to go to.
A good title might be
"How we meant to leave it".
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| Re: a comment on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw |
5-Jun-03/5:15 PM |
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Thank you. You've been over before I take it.
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| Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jun-03/5:13 PM |
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It was better left unexplained. Fuck them, make them draw their own conclusions. Make them imagine. I, on the other hand, gathered something very similiar too your explanation the first time in the cage.
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