Re: The Room by darylchew	30-Aug-04/11:25 AM
Jesus
Re: Out goes the baby with the garbage by INTRANSIT	30-Aug-04/11:08 AM
Far out.
Re: He by BigB	30-Aug-04/11:02 AM
"But you never did came"? Good one, very Arkansass.
Re: a comment on Haunted by Bachus	30-Aug-04/10:53 AM
Is that code for RUN!!!...?
Re: a comment on Haunted by Bachus	30-Aug-04/10:52 AM
The house is a metaphor for a person... you know, getting older, overgrown? like a house would. You've never seen an old overgrown yard with a house somewhere in it?
Re: Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer	29-Aug-04/2:31 AM
Sounds like a threnody.
Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry	18-Aug-04/6:53 AM
Epic
Re: Guess the place! by Patsy	17-Aug-04/11:31 PM
Is it Uranus?
Re: Surfer by INTRANSIT	17-Aug-04/11:23 PM
Ripped
Re: MY HEART REMEMBERS by massangel62	30-Jul-04/1:56 PM
I came to read this because I thought your name was 'massangil' like the douche.
Re: The recovery room by katinchina	29-Jul-04/10:18 PM
The Kitchen ( A Free curse) By Capt. Napkin Fat eyes pleading Plump hands reaching out Obese gravy stuffed dumplings Lifeless Pugeot smells of life drinking spirits Plummish smells of deaf defeated pots and pans Old crapes on sheets, old flour on him Nectarine hair, bloating rumps "The illusion of health and food full bellies"? A cornucopia of...Corn... Starving for pop Still clinging to aluminum, clamoring for salt "The smell of death I met miles outside"? Inside, the Kitchen gleamed with new dishes to break my momma tongue against like a wounded seal on the dingy of infidelity, and a filthy floor.
Re: a comment on Las Gaviotas by Bachus	29-Jul-04/10:02 PM
A canteen of plump
Re: Counting seconds for blowing this world up by Prince of Void	29-Jul-04/9:54 PM
That was a skid mark, really, did the world lie to you son? Pull up your britches, and learn to lie better.
Re: Fragile by QuirkyWonder	29-Jul-04/9:52 PM
oh dear that was like squashed emo droppings, totally gross, you fucking SUCK!
Re: I Dream..... by frdup717	29-Jul-04/9:47 PM
Death by vagina.
Re: Mors Omnia Solvit by shit	29-Jul-04/9:46 PM
Christ, that was bleak... What the fuck is wrong with you? Pickled?
Re: Heart Cancer by shit	23-Jul-04/12:51 AM
This is a parody just begging to dance on your face.
Re: Flying things by INTRANSIT	23-Jul-04/12:49 AM
you're high, weaponry... lol, you should see me PEE IN the snow.
Re: Summer by Dovina	23-Jul-04/12:46 AM
Last line would do better to rhyme as the first stanza did.
Re: Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent	23-Jul-04/12:45 AM
Gnarly