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Fragile (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder There is no easy way of saying
That I'm falling in love with you
You boyishly look over
Staring deep into my soul
This power you're not aware of
How you hold my heart in your hand
On it is tattooed
FRAGILE!
But it's already been broken once
Slowly over time
The pieces have been glued back together
Which hidden amongst
I've found the missing pieces of me
In this era
Of self-awareness
I've learned to love myself
To not change who I am
So with this powerful gift
I've bestowed upon you
All I ask is for your kindness
Of a gentle hand
Up the ladder:
shadows
Down the ladder:
Henry's breeches
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Posted: July 29, 2004 4:33 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 4:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12311 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.130.62.63
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29-Jul-04/9:52 PM
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oh dear that was like squashed emo droppings, totally gross, you fucking SUCK!
i wouldn't say you are emo droppings, but that does seem more posed than honest. it is poetry, not lit class.
See what happens when you post poetry that people don't enjoy reading. You get comments like that. This is better than "Dead" and doesn't have a bad idea behind it, but you need to work on your presentation.
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