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Fragile (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

There is no easy way of saying That I'm falling in love with you You boyishly look over Staring deep into my soul This power you're not aware of How you hold my heart in your hand On it is tattooed FRAGILE! But it's already been broken once Slowly over time The pieces have been glued back together Which hidden amongst I've found the missing pieces of me In this era Of self-awareness I've learned to love myself To not change who I am So with this powerful gift I've bestowed upon you All I ask is for your kindness Of a gentle hand

wilco 31-Jul-04/7:21 PM
See what happens when you post poetry that people don't enjoy reading. You get comments like that. This is better than "Dead" and doesn't have a bad idea behind it, but you need to work on your presentation.




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