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Mors Omnia Solvit (Free verse) by shit
Now life becomes unbearable No more tears on the floor I want to close my door And tell you I´m not available Cowardice you can call I don´t care how you name it I didn´t ask to be born Am I really to be blamed? If you at least paid attention You´d understand my choice Never again hearing my voice By my manual intervention I´m taking this decision rational Life is like this: ephemeral No more bleeding I will stop it Mors omnia solvit

Up the ladder: Hurt

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10484
Posted: July 29, 2004 7:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 7:37 PM PDT
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[7] patty t @ 24.156.158.81 | 29-Jul-04/9:02 PM | Reply
my preferred translation of your luscious title is 'death melts everything' (6 years of Latin not for nothing)... if only this were a poem about microwaves.

[5] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 29-Jul-04/9:46 PM | Reply
Christ, that was bleak... What the fuck is wrong with you? Pickled?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 30-Jul-04/1:59 AM | Reply
Multes pisces in meam corpum nudum diffundo
[5] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.218.59.49 | 30-Jul-04/8:29 AM | Reply
Permanent solution to temporary situation. May I have your shotgun when you're finished, Kurt?
[2] god'swife @ 209.178.140.41 | 5-Aug-04/12:17 PM | Reply
Boooring! Where's the story?
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