Re: Nothing Beautiful Is Perfect by AmericanWigeon	9-Aug-02/8:26 PM
(Perhaps)(Nothing beautiful is beautiful)
Re: Untitled by Piano	9-Aug-02/8:29 PM
The pale star, as opposed to the Dark~Star. To twinkle is to eat bad macaroni salad. Don't frickin twinkle.
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	11-Aug-02/6:07 PM
Hey! Horus! Blow me! I kicked the old lady out, and momma says I gotta find a new one soon because the trailer needs a good cleaning. Can you cook? Send me your resume. ASAP.
Re: Ask Dr 2 by notule	11-Aug-02/9:49 PM
I don't know. It was great up until the gardening. Then, well I had to kick my dog and take a shit. The phone rang. Momma made me flip her over so she wouldn't get sores again. All of a sudden I remembered. THE POEM! So I came running back to give you a 6 hopefully just enough to knock you outta the worst poetry catagory. Cuz you doesn't belong there. I does. And does. And do. Also you just might have accidentally cracked the space time continuem, with that there code of yours, so drink plenty of milk and induce vomiting immediately.
Re: Can't we be together? by Urban Reenchantment	11-Aug-02/10:00 PM
My last functioning brain cell just abandoned ship. It's time to hurt mother. You're gonna go and make me put on my mask and milk her again aren't ya. Boy, oh boy the more of those leather straps I wrap around her breasts the more I understand the mysterys of the universe. Yes. I'm getting closer to the true name of God, and my friend, you have unleashed my entire collection of plug-in-ables to help me inch closer. Mother's gonna scream for joy. Thank you. Brother.
Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #1 by poetandknowit	12-Aug-02/5:37 PM
Slam~Champ aye. I once seen a tornado. It was in Kansas. People died. I smiled like that bitch in your poem. Big!
Re: For the Lonely by snowing	12-Aug-02/7:13 PM
Shut up! Bullshit! I don't believe you or it. Never. Wah! Wah! (Little do you know your setting yourself up for the bleeding heart kill) Duck! 4}10
Re: To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>	12-Aug-02/7:28 PM
Tightning? This is about as tight as a woman needs to be, or can get forest man(I dwell there too, but I'm a cheeky devil). So. you have now been suited with a pythagorean theory. You look nice. Do a little spin on the cat walk. Write more about fish, and comment less. Your breath stinks.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Aug-02/3:55 PM
I can't shoot you down ifin' you don't take off first. Even I know that's not fair. Slam poet? You couldn't slam heroin even if you were a junky and I put a three inch X on your vein. You are vain, and as dull as a river pebble. Try fruity pebbles, you obviously need more vitamins and minerals. This is not even a limmerick Timmy. TIMMY! Timmy?
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Aug-02/4:18 PM
Another -=Dark*Angel=- stooge. F+ Here in the shadows/I found my dad's slong/Here in the shadows I smelled my mom's thong/Plop,Pleep.Poop,Fleep.Geepo.Loppu.Frito.Gogo.Gaga. I have to wipe my ass now. Maybe brush my teeth. 4/10!
Re: Who am I ? by SkateBoardGurl5799	14-Aug-02/1:55 PM
Hands off Titass96. This ones mine. Quit pretending like your interested in the process of writing, when you're just blowing smoke to get your poke. Besides, I say this, "Who are you, who am I, where is god, 911, Ossama Bin fadish trend, skater chick "gurl" introspective is total shit, and I read it over, and over, and over. Go skate board. You can't write. But yer shure pretty when you question "life". LoL!
Re: Mobile home agenda by Bachus	14-Aug-02/2:06 PM
Fuck you! Whoreass8. You still around? I thought they kicked you out for using imitation talent. Oh well, but anyways, fuck you! Ha! You suck! You blow! Gilla monster testicle!
Re: To a Comet Passing by Frass	14-Aug-02/2:44 PM
Great title, superb imagery, flowish and tight. Grand ending! 7/10
Re: Valley of the Dolls by anagram	14-Aug-02/3:01 PM
This is quick, and to the point. Perfectly metered, and drains you just right at the end. "The valley of the dolls" is vindictively tantalizing.
Re: Painters by ==Doylum	14-Aug-02/7:10 PM
Bush's domestic travel usually returns him to his own bed the same day he leaves, so Wednesday's 12-hour day, ending in a Des Moines hotel, was unusual. (To say the least) I don't paint. I hate 'art'. I like tractor calanders with naked chicks and stuff. I doesn't like ethnic people much. I think you might be ethnic. I hate potatoes. I also hate Whoreass8. I might hate you too.
Re: love song by <~>	15-Aug-02/1:14 PM
Do you play? I am troubled by the shape of things to come. You may start an un-nerving trend amongst the others. Normally I hate art, but music. Yes, that's different, and pleasuring the lotus. Ahhh. Fuck! I broke my F-hole. Damnit that's going to be expensive.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Aug-02/1:34 PM
You have brought nothing but guilt and dry cleaning into my honorabo dojo. You, sir are bottomless!
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Aug-02/3:26 PM
Shape. Sound. Texture. Mother has come out of her coma to touch the helmet. But the judge from North Korea is a Dike, so she knocked of a point for size.
Re: Kiss Me by Butterflies	15-Aug-02/6:07 PM
And Bachus falls in love once again. Songstar you sure have a way with words gurl. Why dontcha stand up for daddy and do a little twirl. If I had my way you'd be the new spice girl
Re: Love by skaterdude396	15-Aug-02/6:12 PM
I met your gurlfriend. She's purty. You're kinda purty too. Could you pick that up for me an count to nine. Thank you! How's that feel. Nice an wide huh. Yeah I gets that alot. 0/10.