| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Ask Dr 2 (Free verse) by notule <i>setting outside the Odeon</i>
the sign inside said
ASK DR. HAL?
2: How is it in there?
1: Questionable
2: <i>enters and exists</
i>
1: ?
2: No
1: Yes
2: <i>thumbs up and exits</i>
there is
always a 2
2 give up
gardening
give up
bartending
blah blah blah blah
blah blah!
Up the ladder:
The Call of Duty
Down the ladder:
conundrum, part 2
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.7142856
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.7374108 Overall Rank: 13526 Comments:
[5]
nentwined @
|
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
|
Reply
whoohoo Odeon! =) Hmm. Sorry about the italics not working. poems aren't HTML enabled. oddly interesting poem though it really reads like prose to me. la.
I don't know. It was great up until the gardening. Then, well I had to kick my dog and take a shit. The phone rang. Momma made me flip her over so she wouldn't get sores again. All of a sudden I remembered. THE POEM! So I came running back to give you a 6 hopefully just enough to knock you outta the worst poetry catagory. Cuz you doesn't belong there. I does. And does. And do. Also you just might have accidentally cracked the space time continuem,
with that there code of yours, so drink plenty of milk and induce vomiting immediately. 134 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
