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Love (Free verse) by skaterdude396 Your eyes are like the ocean,
Your lips are cherry red.
I love the pretty hair,
That sits upon your head.
The way you walk,
The way you talk.
Has brought my attention to you.
Now nothing can express my gratitude toward you,
For making our love true.
Up the ladder:
Vituperation
Down the ladder:
My New Enemy???
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Posted: August 15, 2002 5:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2002 5:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.5708694 Overall Rank: 12602 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.80.49
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15-Aug-02/5:23 PM
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This is the most original poeme I have ever read. The title is AMAZING. "Your eyes are like the ocean"... great line. "The way you walk / The way you talk"... great use of 'walk' to rhyme with 'talk'!!! Great work skaterdude396! Excellent, mate! Not only are you a way cool, l33t skate dude, you also have time for feelings! Because you know, feelings are important too, aren't they?
I know i'm tiresome, and your bored with me now so i shall pester only a little longer... but what the fuck is l33t. Oh yeah like jo said the poems awesome man
If you don't know what l33t means then you definitely aren't l33t. I am though.
I met your gurlfriend. She's purty. You're kinda purty too. Could you pick that up for me an count to nine. Thank you! How's that feel. Nice an wide huh. Yeah I gets that alot. 0/10.
A skater dude and skater gurl writing are such sweet little poems to each other. And to think you hide behind the armor of face piercings and green hair. It's Emo poetry.
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