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Love

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

Your eyes are like the ocean, Your lips are cherry red. I love the pretty hair, That sits upon your head. The way you walk, The way you talk. Has brought my attention to you. Now nothing can express my gratitude toward you, For making our love true.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Aug-02/5:23 PM Reply

This is the most original poeme I have ever read. The title is AMAZING. "Your eyes are like the ocean"... great line. "The way you walk / The way you talk"... great use of 'walk' to rhyme with 'talk'!!! Great work skaterdude396! Excellent, mate! Not only are you a way cool, l33t skate dude, you also have time for feelings! Because you know, feelings are important too, aren't they?

[n/a] ==Doylum 15-Aug-02/5:29 PM Reply

I know i'm tiresome, and your bored with me now so i shall pester only a little longer... but what the fuck is l33t. Oh yeah like jo said the poems awesome man

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Aug-02/5:34 PM Reply

If you don't know what l33t means then you definitely aren't l33t. I am though.

[0] Bachus 15-Aug-02/6:12 PM Reply

I met your gurlfriend. She's purty. You're kinda purty too. Could you pick that up for me an count to nine. Thank you! How's that feel. Nice an wide huh. Yeah I gets that alot. 0/10.

[0] poetandknowit 16-Aug-02/7:59 AM Reply

A skater dude and skater gurl writing are such sweet little poems to each other. And to think you hide behind the armor of face piercings and green hair. It's Emo poetry.