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Love (Free verse) by skaterdude396

Your eyes are like the ocean, Your lips are cherry red. I love the pretty hair, That sits upon your head. The way you walk, The way you talk. Has brought my attention to you. Now nothing can express my gratitude toward you, For making our love true.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Aug-02/5:23 PM
This is the most original poeme I have ever read. The title is AMAZING. "Your eyes are like the ocean"... great line. "The way you walk / The way you talk"... great use of 'walk' to rhyme with 'talk'!!! Great work skaterdude396! Excellent, mate! Not only are you a way cool, l33t skate dude, you also have time for feelings! Because you know, feelings are important too, aren't they?




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