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Nothing Beautiful Is Perfect (Free verse) by AmericanWigeon under the clouds and rain
he sees my (still) life
says it's too perfect
the (plastic) apple too round
"nothing beautiful is perfect"
and i (in silence) stand
while he (not perfect)
walks away in the (beautiful) day
Up the ladder:
Follow
Down the ladder:
Mebi
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Posted: July 7, 2002 7:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 7:28 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5454545 Overall Rank: 2495 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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9-Aug-02/8:26 PM
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(Perhaps)(Nothing beautiful is beautiful)
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