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Lyric № 4837

For the Lonely

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

Blocked mind, Empty heart, Sad eyes, Soul tearing apart. I felt like that before, I know just how you feel. Just give yourself some time I know your heart will heal. I'll give you a hug, Put my arms around you. Cuddle you up close And give you a kiss too. You will feel better, Believe me please. I won't lie to you, I want you to be at ease. Clear your mind. Wipe away your tears. Fill your heart. Throw away your fears. You'll never be alone, I'll always hold your hand. Open your heart to me, Your loneliness will end

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5 comments

[4] Bachus 12-Aug-02/7:13 PM Reply
Shut up! Bullshit! I don't believe you or it. Never. Wah! Wah! (Little do you know your setting yourself up for the bleeding heart kill) Duck! 4}10
[10] Princess_Snowflake 23-Jan-04/8:31 PM Reply
That poem will make me feel better if I were sad, worried or upset.
[n/a] lastobelus › Princess_Snowflake 24-Jan-04/3:55 AM Reply
Princess, I recommend this pome: http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=5813

Evidently, the two of you speak the same language.
[n/a] snowing › lastobelus 25-May-04/2:01 AM Reply
No need to sound condescending. Learn to spell first.
[n/a] lastobelus › snowing 11-Jun-04/11:27 AM Reply
"pome" is an affectation, not a misspelling. And my comment was directed toward Princess. Notice the similar use of tense in her comment and the pome I directed her to. Or, "to which I directed her" if it makes you feel better.