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For the Lonely (Lyric) by snowing
Blocked mind, Empty heart, Sad eyes, Soul tearing apart. I felt like that before, I know just how you feel. Just give yourself some time I know your heart will heal. I'll give you a hug, Put my arms around you. Cuddle you up close And give you a kiss too. You will feel better, Believe me please. I won't lie to you, I want you to be at ease. Clear your mind. Wipe away your tears. Fill your heart. Throw away your fears. You'll never be alone, I'll always hold your hand. Open your heart to me, Your loneliness will end

Up the ladder: You Crossed My Mind
Down the ladder: Every other weekend

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.192101
Overall Rank: 4617
Posted: July 15, 2002 9:40 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 9:40 PM PDT
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[4] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Aug-02/7:13 PM | Reply
Shut up! Bullshit! I don't believe you or it. Never. Wah! Wah! (Little do you know your setting yourself up for the bleeding heart kill) Duck! 4}10
[10] Princess_Snowflake @ 209.174.13.10 | 23-Jan-04/8:31 PM | Reply
That poem will make me feel better if I were sad, worried or upset.
[n/a] lastobelus @ 217.82.13.226 > Princess_Snowflake | 24-Jan-04/3:55 AM | Reply
Princess, I recommend this pome: http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=5813

Evidently, the two of you speak the same language.
[n/a] snowing @ 203.122.73.141 > lastobelus | 25-May-04/2:01 AM | Reply
No need to sound condescending. Learn to spell first.
[n/a] lastobelus @ 217.82.8.11 > snowing | 11-Jun-04/11:27 AM | Reply
"pome" is an affectation, not a misspelling. And my comment was directed toward Princess. Notice the similar use of tense in her comment and the pome I directed her to. Or, "to which I directed her" if it makes you feel better.
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