Who am I ?

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Aug 2002 · 9 comments

Who am i? You should know But you dont! I sit and think, Why dont i know who i am? I think because You've corrupted me with all this crap about the president, sept 11 and always win never lose! It's all your fault! I hate you! I will not listen to you anymore! But still i love you! I will always love you but i will never forget who i am. I remember now i have black hair blue eyes. i'm tall and i have a great personality. then i met somebody. It was you. You turned me into a nobody. You made me feel like i was worthless, You made me feel like i didn't exist! I hate you but i can't let go. I'm so confused! It's all You'r fault! But i now know how to make a decision. Im making the most important decision of my life. I'm leaving you. Im going on my own. Till next time, I will not be saying Who am I? But rather i will be saying, Who are you?

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[6] x311 13-Aug-02/10:46 AM Reply

interesting. i can definitely sense the emotion and the feelings in this poem, but the way it is written is a little odd (might be what you were going for) and i think that detracted a litte for me. maybe if you use the same topic but in a different format? I dunno, just my $0.02

[n/a] poetandknowit 13-Aug-02/12:34 PM Reply

Here's a bright young take on the state of things. Shouldn't this go in your journal?

[1] Tarquin De La Bog 13-Aug-02/5:56 PM Reply

I'm sorry, this is an utter dirge. 1. I would bet my life's savings that the author is a Rage Against the Machine fan. I think they're a great band, but I buy their records for the music, not the lyrics. You seem angry, my young friend. Ever tried counselling...?

[1] Tarquin De La Bog 13-Aug-02/5:57 PM Reply

[8] titan69 14-Aug-02/11:56 AM Reply

Like this one! people wright for lots of reasons, its good way to find out about yourself and who you realy are!!

[5] Bachus 14-Aug-02/1:55 PM Reply

Hands off Titass96. This ones mine. Quit pretending like your interested in the process of writing, when you're just blowing smoke to get your poke. Besides, I say this, "Who are you, who am I, where is god, 911, Ossama Bin fadish trend, skater chick "gurl" introspective is total shit, and I read it over, and over, and over. Go skate board. You can't write. But yer shure pretty when you question "life". LoL!

[n/a] SkateBoardGurl5799 14-Aug-02/5:57 PM Reply

EXCUSE ME? all the other comments were pretty good but yours..............HA urs was pure crap! not to mention your poems and or should i say not poems but shit! My dog can write better than ur poems!

[8] reo316 29-Dec-03/10:00 AM Reply

I personaly enjoyed the emotional outburst that was alittle more than rage if you look closly. Its not a text book example of a poem, but It made my day.

[n/a] sk8rs_rule_all › reo316 24-Jul-04/12:22 PM Reply

I would normally say something stupid, but considering i share a user name with her containing the word skate, i will keep quiet.