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Who am I ? (Other) by SkateBoardGurl5799

Who am i? You should know But you dont! I sit and think, Why dont i know who i am? I think because You've corrupted me with all this crap about the president, sept 11 and always win never lose! It's all your fault! I hate you! I will not listen to you anymore! But still i love you! I will always love you but i will never forget who i am. I remember now i have black hair blue eyes. i'm tall and i have a great personality. then i met somebody. It was you. You turned me into a nobody. You made me feel like i was worthless, You made me feel like i didn't exist! I hate you but i can't let go. I'm so confused! It's all You'r fault! But i now know how to make a decision. Im making the most important decision of my life. I'm leaving you. Im going on my own. Till next time, I will not be saying Who am I? But rather i will be saying, Who are you?

Bachus 14-Aug-02/1:55 PM
Hands off Titass96. This ones mine. Quit pretending like your interested in the process of writing, when you're just blowing smoke to get your poke. Besides, I say this, "Who are you, who am I, where is god, 911, Ossama Bin fadish trend, skater chick "gurl" introspective is total shit, and I read it over, and over, and over. Go skate board. You can't write. But yer shure pretty when you question "life". LoL!




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