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Virus (Free verse) by bluwiz The Virus
A virus.
Has infiltrated
Your system
And got through
Your firewalls.
You never saw it coming.
Interrupts
All programs running.
No file is left uninfected.
Corrupted.
Your system
Goes haywire.
The virus
Will leave you
Hanging.
He can make you
Crash
And change
Your system
Forever.
Or stay
And play
Havoc
On your software.
Nothing will be
The same.
Abort.
Retry.
Fail.
Better push
The Restart button:
Improper shutdown detected.
Please check drive for errors.
Up the ladder:
Adam Said
Down the ladder:
Who am I ?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Posted: July 15, 2002 11:48 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 11:48 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8333335 Overall Rank: 10777 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.109.12
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15-Jul-02/11:50 AM
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People can be that way.
I know it's about them.I meant in my life. it's hard to type inflections. It's a great piece.
That was not me.The 9 however..
Damn, its like your poems seem shallow and kinda dumb to me on first read (prob. my own artistic ignorance)but then they're really very good. really like your work, more!
I sometimes get viruses when I download too much pornog... oh... wait... I've said too much...
Ther's a lot of truth to this, and to your Infection poem as well - you handle metaphor very well.
guys, thank you so much for the comments. i really really appreciate it. will try to read your poems and return the favor. thanks. constructive criticism very much welcome. :)
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