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Virus

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2002 · 10 comments

The Virus A virus. Has infiltrated Your system And got through Your firewalls. You never saw it coming. Interrupts All programs running. No file is left uninfected. Corrupted. Your system Goes haywire. The virus Will leave you Hanging. He can make you Crash And change Your system Forever. Or stay And play Havoc On your software. Nothing will be The same. Abort. Retry. Fail. Better push The Restart button: Improper shutdown detected. Please check drive for errors.

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10 comments

[9] razorgrin 15-Jul-02/11:50 AM Reply

People can be that way.

[n/a] bluwiz 15-Jul-02/11:53 AM Reply

it is about people... it's a metaphor. thanks.

[9] razorgrin 15-Jul-02/11:55 AM Reply

I know it's about them.I meant in my life. it's hard to type inflections. It's a great piece.

[n/a] bluwiz 15-Jul-02/12:04 PM Reply

ah okay. i get it. thanks!
but then... sorry, just curious, why did you rate it 2? sorry... it's just that you contradicted yourself...

[9] razorgrin 15-Jul-02/12:13 PM Reply

That was not me.The 9 however..

[n/a] bluwiz 15-Jul-02/12:19 PM Reply

aahhh... okay. wow. you are so nice. thanks so much. i thought it was you. sorry! thanks for the comments on both my poems...

[8] liquidlama 16-Jul-02/11:39 PM Reply

Damn, its like your poems seem shallow and kinda dumb to me on first read (prob. my own artistic ignorance)but then they're really very good. really like your work, more!

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Jul-02/7:57 AM Reply

I sometimes get viruses when I download too much pornog... oh... wait... I've said too much...

[9] Christof 18-Sep-02/8:38 AM Reply

Ther's a lot of truth to this, and to your Infection poem as well - you handle metaphor very well.

[n/a] bluwiz › Christof 20-Sep-02/9:17 AM Reply

guys, thank you so much for the comments. i really really appreciate it. will try to read your poems and return the favor. thanks. constructive criticism very much welcome. :)