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Adam Said (Free verse) by RWAndersen
What if God to Adam said? "Well, what do you think? Do we try again?" Now the rest is history, Cuz Adam said to God of Eve, "Whatever else there is out there, Where there's Eve is where I want to be!" "Have your way, but let me say, From the Garden of Eden, She'll soon be leaving." So you see its history, Cuz Adam said to God of Eve, "Whatever else there is out there, I'll stay, you see she is part of me." Adam's love was put to test, Through time's that where good And some less than best. Though it's been Eternity, Since Adam said to God of Eve, "Whatever else there is out there." God is smiling, that's what I believe.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.8333335
Overall Rank: 10776
Posted: July 13, 2002 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2002 10:00 AM PDT
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