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Adam Said

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Jul 2002 · 0 comments

What if God to Adam said? "Well, what do you think? Do we try again?" Now the rest is history, Cuz Adam said to God of Eve, "Whatever else there is out there, Where there's Eve is where I want to be!" "Have your way, but let me say, From the Garden of Eden, She'll soon be leaving." So you see its history, Cuz Adam said to God of Eve, "Whatever else there is out there, I'll stay, you see she is part of me." Adam's love was put to test, Through time's that where good And some less than best. Though it's been Eternity, Since Adam said to God of Eve, "Whatever else there is out there." God is smiling, that's what I believe.

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