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IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) (Free verse) by coalcracker
Dare I eat a peach? Dare I disturb the universe? (3) Who cares about that crap. My bowels frighten me more. I hate being c o n s t i p a t e d. What was I talking about again? Oh, yes, the Depression. We were so poor Our tin cans were made of wood. (4) And we couldn't even afford vwls. (5) Oh! It passed. Time for Love Boat. (6) Oh! That Isaac!
Up the ladder: Fly Away
Down the ladder: Adam Said
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.8333335
Overall Rank: 10775
Posted: July 10, 2002 12:54 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 12:54 PM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jul-02/12:58 PM | Reply
fucking brilliant!
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.52 | 10-Jul-02/1:42 PM | Reply
what the hell is that?
[4] nentwined @ 66.47.71.146 | 12-Jul-02/3:45 PM | Reply
uh. huh. k....
[7] Venus @ 64.12.96.237 | 21-Aug-02/8:08 PM | Reply
This is the funniest one I've read on this site! What happened to this guy? 7/10
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