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Tribute

Member since 2006 · Posted 10 Jul 2006 · 4 comments

Conceived through rape, Procreate, a vicious brood. I was butchered at birth, In your tomb of the mutilated. I was eaten back to life, then devoured by vermin. My hammer smashed face, Is corroded by your vile maggots of faith. My mouth is wired shut forever, Eyes bulge out, bursting with blood. I was cleansed in a bath of acid, On a bed of nails I lay, Everything I touch will decay. I dance with the dead in my dreams, I follow their hallowed screams. I take your hide before you have died, My violence is now defined. Indecency exposed. Eyes never closed. I stand awake at the cemetary gate, I will decide your fate.

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4 comments

[n/a] amanda_dcosta 14-Jul-06/5:55 AM Reply
Sorry.... not my cup of tea.
[n/a] CherokeeRoseLoggins 17-Jul-06/12:03 PM Reply
Sounds like death itself. The demons perhaps? I could descride either really. Final death is of rot, and this reminds me of some of those movie called The Walking Dead.
[n/a] creepshow › CherokeeRoseLoggins 20-Jul-06/7:41 AM Reply
Yes, it is a tribute to all that is vile, dead within itself touching to destroy all. Tribute is an homage to all the horror.
[n/a] creepshow 20-Jul-06/7:40 AM Reply
Yes, hence the title, it is a tribute to the macabre and horror.