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Tribute (Free verse) by creepshow

Conceived through rape, Procreate, a vicious brood. I was butchered at birth, In your tomb of the mutilated. I was eaten back to life, then devoured by vermin. My hammer smashed face, Is corroded by your vile maggots of faith. My mouth is wired shut forever, Eyes bulge out, bursting with blood. I was cleansed in a bath of acid, On a bed of nails I lay, Everything I touch will decay. I dance with the dead in my dreams, I follow their hallowed screams. I take your hide before you have died, My violence is now defined. Indecency exposed. Eyes never closed. I stand awake at the cemetary gate, I will decide your fate.

CherokeeRoseLoggins 17-Jul-06/12:03 PM
Sounds like death itself. The demons perhaps? I could descride either really. Final death is of rot, and this reminds me of some of those movie called The Walking Dead.




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