Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	23-Oct-02/3:56 PM
okay well here goes..i just wanna take this opportunity to say that -=Dark Angel=- is well..my hero, and the more of his poetry that i, myself, and the rest of us digest the better of we'll be mmmkay..and his pet monkey is currently reading better, and mankind is safe mmmkay..and it's..alright that this miserable cad tlb has dethroned the lord of the "prawne" the "poeme" the "an", the "gay blade", the "poop deck" "the nude", the ever popular "embrowning", and many, many, many more philosophicaly stimulating jargon tweaks not to mention the esteamed "BEAK" and the "out the window" the "breaking of wind in the masters chamber"...not to mention bum attacks to the enth degree [internet poets around the globe murmor] [in agreement] furthermore i demand that we as theologians, satanists philosophers and alchemists take a closer look at this 'work of art' (mr. bog's stain above) at its shape and 'wordplay' the way it strikes deep into your soul and says "hey we're okay..give me a hug, and by the way THE OCEAN IS DEEP FUCKING DEEP!@ DEEP MOTHERFUCKER! WANNA FISH WITH ME BITCH...HUH WANNA FISH ...WITH CEMENT SHOES? FIND THE SIX STOMACHED SHARK YOU LITTLE FUCKER! I'M sorry oh jeez..i fell horrible.it's just that well..i'm sad and sorta lonely.i didn't mean to yell forgive me?..you know..i'm tired and sick man just so god damn tired you know it used to be so much easier and now look at it..it's deep and complicated LIKE THE OCEAN! FUCK YEAH THE OCEAN WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YEAH! were was i again ? oh yeah sad and worried about..well you know life in general...lets take a MOMENT to pray ..sorry.. um lord jesu..we are sinners and fornicators and drunks oh lord...we are bad through and through..the whole lot of us..lord could you please FLOOD US OUT..YEAH FUCK! BRING IT ON MOTHER FUCKER!~ YERAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! have you been giving other people tens mr.t and fiddling with the worst catagory..cuz i'm looking at it and seeing england dominating extensively,so here's some back your way..dick. from the usa and me and pan! and whitEKNUCKLED PHILLIP YEAH! DEEP M OTHA FFERR! deep and beautifull, vast man..timeless the mother of all life..the returning to the womb..the waters of chaos. good day sir!
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	23-Oct-02/4:02 PM
see that children...da's back on top again..thank's to this brave new mexican cad..hiccup.i'm sorry lol!i fell of the wagon good night!
Re: Stranger by feathers68	23-Oct-02/5:06 PM
lol. i think? or you could be the devil? forget about it.
Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w	26-Oct-02/9:42 AM
apparently not very much.
Re: I can't write by Mutant_X	26-Oct-02/9:44 AM
your right you can't...perhaps you can bullit kiss? or maybe wrist the razor? have fun.0.
Re: The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle	26-Oct-02/9:49 AM
heathers have been known to do this..they also appear in quite a few of my 'pieces' of shite also. bitches. whores.junkies the lot of them. in fact in spoken word tromp..youthfullfountain..the evil wench in that is a heather..fucking whores!there there brother..together we will clad them in leather and ride there slimy gashes straight INTO HELL!!!!!HAHAHA. 9.
Re: Society's Sharades by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/9:56 AM
it's fucking amazing..somehow you manage to mispell shit and pull it off..cheers.lol!7.
Re: New Hope by brazen	26-Oct-02/10:02 AM
what is this arbor day? THAT'S IT! THAT'S IT! there's your title, and or statement? what the fuck is this tree hugging shit? some sort of metaphorical coming of age poem to the family and nature...well you lost me in the first stanza..and i'm not coming out for anything less than a handfull of pistaccios. capeesh. bastard. fuck! you've gone a tangled my noodle. bastard.
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones	26-Oct-02/10:04 AM
see what happens when you spray pina colada car scents to fast while on the freeway.overdosed on fruitiness.6.
Re: survival of the weakest by brazen	28-Oct-02/10:31 AM
What? i suppose the reverse couldn't be argued either? you sir have od in willy wonka's chocolate factory and the oompa loompas gang raped you on the marshmallow bank of the butterscotch river...here's to the trials of life! 10!-9+5= my middle finger! 6.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/12:49 PM
perhaps. an eight dollar barley wine filled glass, and a salt throw over my left shoulder for richard harris..i cry on your shoulder and repent for me and all of mine..in that valley everything hooks and my barbs get filed straight...how about another date? sorry that i tend to over compensate, and right turn clyde the guard rail. want some kale? i have a new gun.
Re: Beer by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/12:51 PM
i agree with the chick who likes horse piss. everytime, actually.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/12:52 PM
ouch. atari.
Re: A love of the midlands by ==Doylum	29-Oct-02/6:26 PM
i went cow tipping once in bellingham. i am the shoe horn that invented sophistication, and the blow dryer.
Re: Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on	29-Oct-02/9:29 PM
alright...i don't know why, well yeah i do, but this piece broke my fucking broken heart from atoms to quarks. you deserve a 10 if not for just proving to me that this style of writing can still be poignant and effective..then for making me even consider why. 10..if i was horus8 i'd give you a golden que-tip award, but i'm not. i'm ryan thorstad.10!e
Re: Corpse's Crescendo by phbiscuit	29-Oct-02/9:37 PM
yeah...that is a tough thing to remember how to do? and metaphor-ic-ally too?
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/9:43 AM
i liked the title and mood...i've never been much of a morning person...which is my point.6.
Re: George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom	30-Oct-02/10:03 AM
it could also just be that the little yellow bus is broke down and it's halloween...bombing is bad, saddam is also bad...hire the washington sniper put him on peyote and tell him he's on a mission from all-ah to kill saddam and replace him..to finally bring peace...amen and doug....read the old testament could you...please. thanks war! war! more war! that is all...aries has to stretch a little too...otherwise we grow nerdy as a physical people, and that my friend leads to bad breeding and deformities...good day.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Oct-02/6:41 PM
scabbard grill? priceless, then a cave carved on skin...eerie..
Re: Lonely by eviltwin	2-Nov-02/11:59 AM
keep trying...while i get the popcorn..i don't want to miss this.e