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Lonely (Free verse) by eviltwin
Loneliness is the smell Of cold mountain air Wind blowing on a barren peak Snow-scented and frostbitten From standing on top of the world Arms raised to the sky In attempt to encompass The infinite

Up the ladder: freehand
Down the ladder: Song of departure

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7533
Posted: July 23, 2002 4:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 4:15 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 23-Jul-02/7:07 PM | Reply
I've been to Mt. Baldy, the Zen guy there said come back tomorrow with some banannas. monkeys like banannas. I like monkeysy
[2] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 2-Nov-02/11:59 AM | Reply
keep trying...while i get the popcorn..i don't want to miss this.e
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