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freehand (Free verse) by Montinequego
pain is envy. The one soul I had left. Torn away, and dragged through the mud of grimy hobo lairs. I onced believed I was the shining knight. Now I lay in the trash and regret my dream. Can I crawl out, I can try. Up and over, fall on the ground. Pain is envy The one soul I had left. Meet a man that i thought didnt exist. The mirror never lies. Noone wated me, noone does. I should probably go back. Pain is envy The one soul I had left Pressing on, trying to win. Being run over by the mere mortals of today. I am the knight once again. Pain is envy. The only soul I had left. Realizing my dream, Ive never been out of. The misty haze just lifts. Pain is envy. The only thing I had left. I sleep in the rot once again.

Up the ladder: Tomorrow
Down the ladder: Lonely

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7535
Posted: July 21, 2002 6:17 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 6:17 AM PDT
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Comments:
[6] shwenatjadeflower @ 68.12.149.5 | 25-Jul-02/10:35 PM | Reply
0.o weirdo. hehe. love you.
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.10 | 14-Aug-02/12:15 PM | Reply
sap.
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