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freehand (Free verse) by Montinequego
pain is envy.
The one soul I had left.
Torn away, and dragged through the mud of grimy hobo lairs.
I onced believed I was the shining knight.
Now I lay in the trash and regret my dream.
Can I crawl out, I can try.
Up and over, fall on the ground.
Pain is envy
The one soul I had left.
Meet a man that i thought didnt exist.
The mirror never lies.
Noone wated me, noone does.
I should probably go back.
Pain is envy
The one soul I had left
Pressing on, trying to win.
Being run over by the mere mortals of today.
I am the knight once again.
Pain is envy.
The only soul I had left.
Realizing my dream, Ive never been out of.
The misty haze just lifts.
Pain is envy.
The only thing I had left.
I sleep in the rot once again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7535
Posted: July 21, 2002 6:17 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 6:17 AM PDT
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