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In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones mist rolls over seaward
light growing streetlights ending
sleep slips far past dawn
Up the ladder:
Gone Away
Down the ladder:
it was red
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Posted: October 30, 2002 5:29 AM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2002 5:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.913823 Overall Rank: 1428 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 32.102.21.235
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30-Oct-02/5:44 AM
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Now THAT'S a Haiku! I'd like to see more of these, please.
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Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200
> INTRANSIT
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30-Oct-02/5:48 AM
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Thank you very much sir! I feel something of a fraud, 'cause that only took five minutes. I'm not worthy.
As Keats said, as poems do not come as easily as leaves to the tress, you might as well not bother. This is very good.
Trees, not tress. Sorry.
"light growing, streetlights ending"? Good haiku.
'sleeps slips far'--tasty!
Zzin, are you suggesting Nick should change it to "sleeps..."?
oops--typo. fingers not awake yet. no, i love it as it is.
Lovely.
i liked the title and mood...i've never been much of a morning person...which is my point.6.
Don't you have a fucking harp to go tune somewhere
"Townshend said in his Saturday statement that he was not a pedophile and only used the porn site once while doing research for an autobiography
dealing with his own suspected childhood sexual abuse." you like the band local h? i'm listening to "you high fiving mother fucker" right now. great song. shame about pete aye. lolatwttb.
I'm somewhat bemused by this comment. I've not heard of Local H - are they from one of our former colonies in the Americas?
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