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In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones

mist rolls over seaward light growing streetlights ending sleep slips far past dawn

Frass 30-Oct-02/7:55 AM
Zzin, are you suggesting Nick should change it to "sleeps..."?




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