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In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes
(
Haiku
) by
Nicholas Jones
mist rolls over seaward light growing streetlights ending sleep slips far past dawn
Frass
30-Oct-02/7:55 AM
Zzin, are you suggesting Nick should change it to "sleeps..."?
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