| Re: dot.com by PodPoet |
12-Feb-05/11:59 AM |
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well it's original, but that's about it
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| Re: The Runaway by bamf909 |
28-Feb-05/11:29 PM |
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More, more, give us more. . .I like your poems
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| Re: Broken by midnitebeauty101 |
16-Mar-05/5:16 PM |
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I really like the first 6 lines, and the last four lines except the very last one . . .I'll have to check out some of your other poems eh
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| Re: This path by midnitebeauty101 |
16-Mar-05/5:18 PM |
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I don't sense much feeling in the poem, but I bet you have a lot more you could put into it?
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| Re: Social Awarness by midnitebeauty101 |
16-Mar-05/5:19 PM |
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| Re: will you? by Sapphire |
21-Mar-05/8:51 PM |
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I like the last line, and a lot of the rest of it too. I think it could flow a lot better though.
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| Re: melancholy: by Sapphire |
21-Mar-05/8:53 PM |
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| Re: Tribulations of the ear and eye by oneglove |
23-Mar-05/6:49 PM |
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| Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove |
23-Mar-05/6:52 PM |
Dang! I like it is an understatement
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| Re: the victory by oneglove |
23-Mar-05/7:00 PM |
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love the topic but I've seen your other poems and I bet you could make it flow a lot better
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| Re: Listless Nights by blindwriter |
4-Apr-05/9:29 PM |
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I love it. . .it's like I can see the picture you painted with the poem in my mind
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| Re: Alive by emilyowey |
13-Apr-05/8:26 PM |
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whoa! The first 2 lines don't really make sense to me, but I absolutely love the rest of the poem
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| Re: Life Before Birth by GregDeEgg |
17-Sep-05/9:31 PM |
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| Re: Johnny by MacFrantic |
29-Sep-05/7:40 PM |
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I would like to hear it read
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| Re: The Man with the Fiberglass Head by MacFrantic |
29-Sep-05/8:03 PM |
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| Re: on passing through some small town by Dental Panic |
4-Oct-05/7:00 PM |
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31-May-06/10:21 PM |
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I like it. . .it's got that cool sad/happy thing going
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31-May-06/10:23 PM |
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I think the next time you are at a camp fire or even on a lake at night with a flashlight you should resite this one
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31-May-06/10:25 PM |
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I love this one! I wish I could write a poem like that. I'll just have to read yours instead.
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31-May-06/10:27 PM |
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Whoa! If this was printed out on some kind of card I would use it as a bookmark or something. . .
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