replying on Can Predictions Be Proven? by peaceseeker
19 Nov 2004, 7:56 AM
These wings are invincible (poetic license).
i think you are referring to resonance.
What are you vague/unclear about?
i think you are referring to resonance.
What are you vague/unclear about?
on She Crab by http://mulberryfairy
11 Oct 2004, 1:03 PM
So vivid I can smell the saltwater.
The crab looked alive, but was actually dead.
The lifelike floating legs and protruding passive eyes surveying all - kind of creepy, yet thought provoking!
The crab looked alive, but was actually dead.
The lifelike floating legs and protruding passive eyes surveying all - kind of creepy, yet thought provoking!
replying on am i on speaker phone? good~ by peaceseeker
26 May 2004, 1:00 PM
wow, i really needed that - this was from my soul ~ sometimes compliments give breath where there is life.
replying on am i on speaker phone? good~ by peaceseeker
26 May 2004, 12:59 PM
my skin is hereby tougher~
replying on can't take the heat? by peaceseeker
22 May 2004, 8:03 AM
git yo ass out the kitchen, yo freaky pink bunny!
replying on and the world evolves by peaceseeker
17 May 2004, 10:29 AM
not homosexual, why do you ask?
maybe i'm more bloody than poemranker.
bloodier?
maybe i'm more bloody than poemranker.
bloodier?
replying on and the world evolves by peaceseeker
17 May 2004, 10:28 AM
create your own commas - not my style.
Ani D.- "We'll see what you are made of by what you make of me."
Ani D.- "We'll see what you are made of by what you make of me."
replying on and the world evolves by peaceseeker
16 May 2004, 12:15 PM
I was intentionally keeping it simple in order to convey a feeling. Interpret the conveyed feelings any way you want, just remember: you are what you make of me. This mysterious "you" is who the poem is written for.
on fully awake by crwncka1
7 Jan 2004, 8:48 AM
nice journey (to "the conscious reunion with (your) love").
i love this.
i love this.
replying on The Glint by peaceseeker
13 Dec 2003, 10:17 AM
"Diamonds lost at sea" was a metaphor for the feeling the taste provoked in me.
replying on The Glint by peaceseeker
13 Dec 2003, 10:16 AM
The redundancies were intentional, I was trying to make the flow come around full circle.
replying on Pinches by peaceseeker
26 Nov 2003, 2:52 PM
I suggest you consider counseling to help with your obvious mother complex.
If you don't like my poetry, then don't read it.
Again, FUCK OFF.
If you don't like my poetry, then don't read it.
Again, FUCK OFF.
replying on Pinches by peaceseeker
26 Nov 2003, 7:15 AM
guess you can't recognize art when you see it.
F.F.R. (for future reference) just FUCK OFF - how am I supposed to comprehend you when you don't make any sense?
F.F.R. (for future reference) just FUCK OFF - how am I supposed to comprehend you when you don't make any sense?
on Revolution by Nitroxide
25 Nov 2003, 10:25 AM
YES!!
replying on Pinches by peaceseeker
25 Nov 2003, 10:17 AM
I don't know what FUBAR means.
In fact, I don't understand anything you said.
In fact, I don't understand anything you said.
on Memoirs IV by http://mulberryfairy
11 Nov 2003, 9:46 AM
Love the content, love the dialogue, but maybe you could portray the dialogue somehow without quotations in order to be more poem-y.
love -"sober blue eyes met with mine"
"feverish hands"
"spinning world"
"rust pimpled metal"
love -"sober blue eyes met with mine"
"feverish hands"
"spinning world"
"rust pimpled metal"
replying on Love's Fine Line by peaceseeker
1 Nov 2003, 4:14 PM
thanks, I'm sure I will use your suggestions for my next draft.
why tone down presumed "sexual metaphors"? if anything, I'll liven them up a bit. -not that it was written to be sexual, btw.
why tone down presumed "sexual metaphors"? if anything, I'll liven them up a bit. -not that it was written to be sexual, btw.
do something else, now.