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She Crab (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
This crab,
this partially buried crab,
wet with tide,
resides in waiting.
A young child will yell out,
thrilled at finding a whole one,
a live one.
The child,
who fears the movement
of spidery legs,
her pinchers,
her knowing antennae,
will dig her out with driftwood.
She flips suddenly, too soon,
the child startles back
then sees her calm display:
the place where the once
too too solid flesh lived.
Now her hollow husk
contains a bit of salty sand,
brown flecks of othersâ shells.
Fear dissipated,
the child's cold fingers linger,
then turn her back over,
leave her fragile body in the tide,
her legs still attached and floating,
lifelike,
protruding eyes surveying all,
passive.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.25
Weighted score: 5.8740597
Overall Rank: 1537
Posted: October 11, 2004 6:40 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2004 6:40 AM PDT
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