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can't take the heat? (Free verse) by peaceseeker
cleared my way out of an OUI one wide open Friday night my heart aching for another love lost under the masks of love-less insanity sirens blaring day and night my lover took off his lover's masks to reveal the unloving child he is. so i unsacrificed my whole life unfolded my angel wings and flew danced nearly buck-naked on stage and miraculously won the second place prize my girlfriends and new false friends and the pimp absorbed my nervousness did not have one alcoholic beverage in the face of 18 year-old porn stars and beauty queens. my white bows and over-groomed body captured the eyes of the whole room when i stepped out of my white skirt. at the end, lined up in a row, me in front and my Angel took flight, so free now. my ex-lover, left to be with his dog-wife perfect for the canine-human, he is. so i need to take my herbals juice my carrots and celery pay the city for an over-due ticket so i won't end up like the dog-man with no identification.

Down the ladder: Tribute to "The Cow"

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6052
Posted: May 21, 2004 11:28 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2004 11:28 AM PDT
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[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 216.196.147.170 | 21-May-04/11:58 PM | Reply
Welcome to Hell's Kitchen
[n/a] peaceseeker @ 63.164.145.33 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 22-May-04/8:03 AM | Reply
git yo ass out the kitchen, yo freaky pink bunny!
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