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Catspotting with Hitler & a nigger cat (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
This was supposed to be a ghazal, but I won't risk naming it as such-
because honestly? I can't figure out what the definite rules are since
every other asshole with a pen also has an opinion. So I've decided to
write it in this way- calling it free verse.
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Used to love my wily white cat;
Killed her with a shoe after she gave birth.
Its kitten happily sleeps in the litter box;
Being half negro wasn't bad enough.
Snow melted in my mini globe;
beautiful before bursting into smoke.
The kitten wants revenge for living in his poop.
I know its plotting murder when he defecates.
The walls have some how learned to speak.
Hitler was reincarnated- then barked in german.
Nigger cat scratched at his tormentor.
I painted over the marks in red.
They found me two days ago
quite dead;
slowly poisoned by scattered cat shit.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6051
Posted: November 28, 2003 3:35 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 3:38 AM PST
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