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Catspotting with Hitler & a nigger cat (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
This was supposed to be a ghazal, but I won't risk naming it as such- because honestly? I can't figure out what the definite rules are since every other asshole with a pen also has an opinion. So I've decided to write it in this way- calling it free verse. ________________________________________________________________________ Used to love my wily white cat; Killed her with a shoe after she gave birth. Its kitten happily sleeps in the litter box; Being half negro wasn't bad enough. Snow melted in my mini globe; beautiful before bursting into smoke. The kitten wants revenge for living in his poop. I know its plotting murder when he defecates. The walls have some how learned to speak. Hitler was reincarnated- then barked in german. Nigger cat scratched at his tormentor. I painted over the marks in red. They found me two days ago quite dead; slowly poisoned by scattered cat shit.

Up the ladder: The Pimple Haikus -
Down the ladder: can't take the heat?

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6048
Posted: November 28, 2003 3:35 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 3:38 AM PST
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[8] horus8 @ | 28-Nov-03/6:08 PM | Reply
I like that movie. I like Ghazals. I licks that shit, and then swats it off the table and shit.
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