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Random (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
I have absolutely no idea who you are, and I really don't care when it gets right down to it. I follow you out of need, obsession, desire and the utter necessitous compromise involved in it. You have feelings, and life, of this I am sure, and there is more; You have a profound stupidity for it. You have shallow goals, and even worse, no logic - - or need to feel obliged, or competence with needing it. I deserve to have you stripped down at random All uglied up for the camera, and ready to get it. In the end, I loved it; But at first, I was shy and afraid - - of the truth; How when consumed, I felt better for it. Boiling your heart and pretending Nothing is really what it seems.

Up the ladder: Kenny G
Down the ladder: The beggar in me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6055
Posted: May 13, 2004 5:13 PM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2004 5:13 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] sliver @ 63.190.73.71 | 13-May-04/6:24 PM | Reply
Were you under orders? Huh were ya?
[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.165 | 13-May-04/7:01 PM | Reply
For accuracy, 10. For myself,0
[6] sliver @ 63.190.73.71 > INTRANSIT | 13-May-04/7:11 PM | Reply
Hey INTRANSIT Long time, tell me what I need for waiting for the worms? Still can't quite get it down, always want to give it away.
[n/a] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 13-May-04/7:15 PM | Reply
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