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Steve Irwin (Free verse) by Bobjim
He won't be beaten, Till he's eaten.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6005
Posted: February 4, 2004 1:43 AM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2004 1:43 AM PST
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 4-Feb-04/4:48 AM | Reply
CROIKEY!!111 -10-
[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 | 4-Feb-04/6:27 AM | Reply
I would change the "Till" to "Until".

But that's because I'm a colossal arse.

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[n/a] Bobjim @ 213.122.51.79 > wFraser Allonby Q.C.w | 4-Feb-04/8:37 AM | Reply
Since you didn't spot it, I'll point it out to make you feel stupid:
"Till" is completely wrong anyway, it should be "'Til".
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > Bobjim | 4-Feb-04/8:43 AM | Reply
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=till

Read it 'n' weep dickface.

till2 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (tl)
prep.

Until.


conj.

Until.

Usage Note: Till and until are generally interchangeable in both writing and speech ... Till is actually the older word, with until having been formed by the addition to it of the prefix un-, meaning “up to.”
[n/a] Bobjim @ 213.122.156.99 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 4-Feb-04/9:13 AM | Reply
What can I say, if it had actually been me that wrote that I might feel stupid. But I didn't, and I don't.
[10] Ranger @ 86.142.241.178 | 4-Sep-06/11:40 PM | Reply
Or barbed through the heart by a stingray.

*A minute's silence at the passing of a legend*
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