poemranker ::20 most recent comments by peaceseeker (21-40) and replies

Comments bypeaceseeker, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Love's Fine Line by peaceseeker 31 Oct 2003, 10:20 AM
The sky or the ground? Hmm?
replying on Bus Fare Home by peaceseeker 16 Oct 2003, 8:25 AM
Hm, maybe you should write a poem about that.
replying on The Pipe Scraping Tool by peaceseeker 14 Oct 2003, 1:08 PM
Glad you appreciated the unintentional analogies!
replying on The Pipe Scraping Tool by peaceseeker 12 Oct 2003, 4:24 PM
I find the common "stink cunt" to be a lovely alternative to the common bacteria ridden sandpaper cock.
on For W. by A. Nomaly 12 Oct 2003, 9:55 AM
Is that "E" for ecstasy?
I liked your analogy.
on NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff 12 Oct 2003, 9:53 AM
sad. truly sad.
on She wishes by INTRANSIT 12 Oct 2003, 9:52 AM
obviously he doesn't know how to use either one.
on Beautiful Scars by William Delacroix 12 Oct 2003, 9:51 AM
say more about the beautiful scars, why were they beautiful? did she move on?
on I wish I had a friend by un_oying 12 Oct 2003, 9:48 AM
pretty depressing.
on the two faces of the bar social. by darby pyn 12 Oct 2003, 9:46 AM
Needs more line breaks, and needs more explanation about what's going on.
on Therapy by http://bandgeek 11 Oct 2003, 7:03 AM
A beautiful account of sympathy sex gone wild.›
replying on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker 10 Oct 2003, 2:46 PM
tong winded?
what would you cut out?
too reflective?
what do you mean by that?
needs to be snappier?
will take that into consideration, thanks.
titles are labels, aren't they?
replying on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker 10 Oct 2003, 2:42 PM
ever heard of a creative license?
on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker 9 Oct 2003, 10:00 AM
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY PLEASE.
THANKS.
replying on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker 5 Oct 2003, 11:39 AM
if you know about then answer my question.
replying on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker 4 Oct 2003, 4:56 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
It is quite a contrast to the "crap abroad," isn't it?
replying on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker 4 Oct 2003, 4:55 PM
Thanks.
What's wrong with fairyland forest things though?
replying on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker 4 Oct 2003, 4:54 PM
I don't understand the "burnin bush" part.
replying on You Had To Go by peaceseeker 1 Oct 2003, 6:53 AM
I loved his longboard in both senses of the word!
-but I don't know if it was his first gig with his band!!
replying on all in one day by peaceseeker 1 Oct 2003, 6:51 AM
Love the peace guy!!
Actually, my friend just got his wisdom teeth out yesterday, so needless to say, that slowed him down a bit.
The hallucinating man I'm talking about always wears many coat layers and a winter hat, he's probably in his twenties.
Thank you for the suggestions, I'll use them in my revision.