Re: a comment on Love's Fine Line by peaceseeker	31-Oct-03/10:20 AM
The sky or the ground? Hmm?
Re: a comment on Bus Fare Home by peaceseeker	16-Oct-03/8:25 AM
Hm, maybe you should write a poem about that.
Re: a comment on The Pipe Scraping Tool by peaceseeker	14-Oct-03/1:08 PM
Glad you appreciated the unintentional analogies!
Re: a comment on The Pipe Scraping Tool by peaceseeker	12-Oct-03/4:24 PM
I find the common "stink cunt" to be a lovely alternative to the common bacteria ridden sandpaper cock.
Re: For W. by A. Nomaly	12-Oct-03/9:55 AM
Is that "E" for ecstasy? I liked your analogy.
Re: NUMERO UNO by gorbichoff	12-Oct-03/9:53 AM
sad. truly sad.
Re: She wishes by INTRANSIT	12-Oct-03/9:52 AM
obviously he doesn't know how to use either one.
Re: Beautiful Scars by William Delacroix	12-Oct-03/9:51 AM
say more about the beautiful scars, why were they beautiful? did she move on?
Re: I wish I had a friend by un_oying	12-Oct-03/9:48 AM
pretty depressing.
Re: the two faces of the bar social. by darby pyn	12-Oct-03/9:46 AM
Needs more line breaks, and needs more explanation about what's going on.
Re: Therapy by http://bandgeek	11-Oct-03/7:03 AM
A beautiful account of sympathy sex gone wild.›
Re: a comment on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker	10-Oct-03/2:46 PM
tong winded? what would you cut out? too reflective? what do you mean by that? needs to be snappier? will take that into consideration, thanks. titles are labels, aren't they?
Re: a comment on A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker	10-Oct-03/2:42 PM
ever heard of a creative license?
Re: A Countercultural Trip by peaceseeker	9-Oct-03/10:00 AM
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY PLEASE. THANKS.
Re: a comment on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker	5-Oct-03/11:39 AM
if you know about then answer my question.
Re: a comment on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker	4-Oct-03/4:56 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is quite a contrast to the "crap abroad," isn't it?
Re: a comment on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker	4-Oct-03/4:55 PM
Thanks. What's wrong with fairyland forest things though?
Re: a comment on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker	4-Oct-03/4:54 PM
I don't understand the "burnin bush" part.
Re: a comment on You Had To Go by peaceseeker	1-Oct-03/6:53 AM
I loved his longboard in both senses of the word! -but I don't know if it was his first gig with his band!!
Re: a comment on all in one day by peaceseeker	1-Oct-03/6:51 AM
Love the peace guy!! Actually, my friend just got his wisdom teeth out yesterday, so needless to say, that slowed him down a bit. The hallucinating man I'm talking about always wears many coat layers and a winter hat, he's probably in his twenties. Thank you for the suggestions, I'll use them in my revision.