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Beautiful Scars

by William Delacroix

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

The beautiful scars he gave her. The time that he betrayed her: The voices in his head. The words he never said. The love she longed to feel. The palpable pain that made it real: The Flesh on which he fed. The bed spread white to red. The beautiful lies she gave him. The time that she forgave him: The sawed-off between his fesses. The mess to which she confesses.

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[5] Shuushin 12-Oct-03/7:44 AM Reply
"The sawed-off between his fesses." is interesting -
is the implication he was shot in the chest?

Never seen fesses used like that - works for me, though.
[n/a] William Delacroix › Shuushin 13-Oct-03/7:32 AM Reply
Fesseってゆう言葉はフランス語で「尻」の意味だよ。
[5] peaceseeker 12-Oct-03/9:51 AM Reply
say more about the beautiful scars, why were they beautiful? did she move on?
[7] horus8 12-Oct-03/3:33 PM Reply
One should kill randomly without personal ties to the victim. Otherwise, it's just another lame boring crime of jealous genitalia.
[8] deleted user 13-Oct-03/5:39 AM Reply
I feel that there is something missing too. It does need to describe the 'beautiful scars'. But other than that it was very good.