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NUMERO UNO (Free verse) by gorbichoff
I just started this,
so don't start to diss,
I can't write poems,
but I like lawn gnomes,
don't start to hate,
just appreciate,
what I'm writing here,
is not so clear,
I'm just a cracka flowin',
not really knowin',
say what you will,
but remember your E-brake on a hill,
hmmm that was dumb,
now my brain is feeling numb,
I'd better stop now,
before someone has a cow,
just remember the big one zero,
makes me a hero.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.5
Overall Rank: 2711
Posted: October 10, 2003 9:09 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 9:09 PM PDT
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One of the best I've seen on here!