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NUMERO UNO (Free verse) by gorbichoff
I just started this, so don't start to diss, I can't write poems, but I like lawn gnomes, don't start to hate, just appreciate, what I'm writing here, is not so clear, I'm just a cracka flowin', not really knowin', say what you will, but remember your E-brake on a hill, hmmm that was dumb, now my brain is feeling numb, I'd better stop now, before someone has a cow, just remember the big one zero, makes me a hero.

Up the ladder: Squeeze it out...
Down the ladder: Beautiful Scars

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.5
Overall Rank: 2711
Posted: October 10, 2003 9:09 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 9:09 PM PDT
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[n/a] tadpole @ 24.55.116.69 | 10-Oct-03/9:26 PM | Reply
I'll give you a big one oh ranking for this high-quality poem

One of the best I've seen on here!
[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 11-Oct-03/5:19 AM | Reply
"I'm just a cracka flowin',
not really knowin',"

YOU SHALL HAVE YOUR BIG ONE ZERO!
[n/a] un_oying @ 24.55.116.69 | 11-Oct-03/6:34 PM | Reply
A hero you shall be on the little yellow bus indeed.
[0] peaceseeker @ 24.97.224.6 | 12-Oct-03/9:53 AM | Reply
sad. truly sad.
[10] electroman1979 @ 205.188.208.105 | 13-Oct-03/7:46 PM | Reply
pretty good, write some more 10
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