| Re: body image by http://mulberryfairy |
27-Sep-03/2:34 PM |
It's interesting to me the way you related the suicide to the work-out class. I would like to see more about how the two are similar.
Very well written, a perfect 10.
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| Re: a comment on You Had To Go by peaceseeker |
22-Sep-03/12:53 PM |
First of all, you have way too much free time.
Secondly, your smug little check-list tries to fit my poem into some little box and is very assumptuous. Which we both know makes an "ass out of me and you."
Please try commenting without hiding behind a list of inconsequential criteria.
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| Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8 |
16-Sep-03/3:48 PM |
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Is it tigers that have forked penises?
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| Re: A new beginning by hobojo |
16-Sep-03/3:46 PM |
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I liked the sweating part, but it needs more sex.
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| Re: a comment on horse ass, whore ass, poor asses by peaceseeker |
15-Sep-03/5:23 PM |
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| Re: a comment on horse ass, whore ass, poor asses by peaceseeker |
15-Sep-03/5:22 PM |
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it's not a piece of meat, it's a poem.
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| Re: a comment on horse ass, whore ass, poor asses by peaceseeker |
15-Sep-03/5:21 PM |
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| Re: a comment on horse ass, whore ass, poor asses by peaceseeker |
15-Sep-03/5:21 PM |
This thonged masochist could have been me, but the truth is, I would rather be a horsebacked female cop than do that shit.
It's very good exercise.
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| Re: Plastic is Forever by http://mulberryfairy |
14-Sep-03/8:46 AM |
Can you say more about the bruising?
I imagine the mention of bruising has more significance than just its physicality on the arm.
What are your thoughts on the friend's fervorous grip, and the narrator's bruising?
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
2-Sep-03/9:21 AM |
Wait, is the naughty secret pleasurable to keep, or painful. You know me - black or white? I wonder if tasting the delicious fruit is your way of counteracting the pain of the secret. . .
(all under fictious terms, of course).
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
2-Sep-03/9:17 AM |
What does keeping the "naughty secret" accomplish? In my experience, pleasure shared is pleasure multiplied.
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
2-Sep-03/9:13 AM |
Oooo the truth comes out!!
By my standards for love, in and of itself, you are in love. With whom? And how do your standards for love differ?
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| Re: Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/2:30 PM |
I love the imagery here. I really felt this one.
Was the desire to have something delicious all to yourself?
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| Re: Part I: The Peach by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/2:25 PM |
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I liked your statement "I guess that was that," but I want to know more. What else were you feeling? Relief that it was over? Not wanting it to be over?
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| Re: Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/2:23 PM |
No offense, but is remorselessly a word?
One question: are you in love?
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| Re: summer heat blues by peaceseeker |
25-Aug-03/8:32 AM |
I'm glad you liked it, it's still a little bit of a "scratchy" one.
A "hermaphrodite pickle" is a penis that is so small, the man could be considered a hermaphrodite.
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| Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy |
23-Aug-03/11:11 AM |
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Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
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| Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy |
23-Aug-03/11:11 AM |
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Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
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| Re: Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy |
23-Aug-03/11:08 AM |
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Sweet friendship, but, isn't this a perfect example of how we're set up to not be close with the ones we love?
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| Re: Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy |
23-Aug-03/11:02 AM |
I have roaches in my building, for the first time in my life. Some have, like, twenty legs, long antennae, and spots.
I would describe the roaches.
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