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A new beginning

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Sep 2003 · Edited 16 Sep 2003 · 7 comments

A common interest A random compulsion Passing the way home A never ending night A shivering sunrise Yuppie athletics Rain, and a fountain Whiskey, no pillows An attack in the kitchen No socks allowed Watching the river Walking under bridges Falling asleep to movies A romantic dinner for two Beating me in a miniskirt Cuddling in a small bed intoxicated by your kisses painting and lasagna no garlic mushrooms driving everywhere You watched me sweat I watched you sweat Then we sweat together An exchange of gifts And just one week together

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7 comments

[8] http://mulberryfairy 8-Sep-03/6:27 PM Reply
Do you mean "whiskey"?
[7] nentwined 16-Sep-03/1:23 PM Reply
beating you in a miniskirt?
[n/a] hobojo › nentwined 17-Sep-03/10:18 AM Reply
PS2 - Aggressive Inline character
[n/a] peaceseeker 16-Sep-03/3:46 PM Reply
I liked the sweating part, but it needs more sex.
[8] http://mulberryfairy 16-Sep-03/4:29 PM Reply
Why no garlic?
[n/a] hobojo › http://mulberryfairy 17-Sep-03/10:18 AM Reply
My roomate joined us for dinner and the next morning informed us as to his experiences over the gas he claims was from the garlic mushrooms. It was probably the dairy of lasagna.
[4] son of the moon 5-Jun-04/4:11 PM Reply
ing weakens the verbiage. i want more immediancy from you