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A new beginning (Free verse) by hobojo
A common interest A random compulsion Passing the way home A never ending night A shivering sunrise Yuppie athletics Rain, and a fountain Whiskey, no pillows An attack in the kitchen No socks allowed Watching the river Walking under bridges Falling asleep to movies A romantic dinner for two Beating me in a miniskirt Cuddling in a small bed intoxicated by your kisses painting and lasagna no garlic mushrooms driving everywhere You watched me sweat I watched you sweat Then we sweat together An exchange of gifts And just one week together

Up the ladder: Self Portrait
Down the ladder: Cyber Junkie

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6095
Posted: September 8, 2003 1:05 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2003 10:54 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.238 | 8-Sep-03/6:27 PM | Reply
Do you mean "whiskey"?
[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 | 16-Sep-03/1:23 PM | Reply
beating you in a miniskirt?
[n/a] hobojo @ 166.94.9.207 > nentwined | 17-Sep-03/10:18 AM | Reply
PS2 - Aggressive Inline character
[n/a] peaceseeker @ 24.97.224.6 | 16-Sep-03/3:46 PM | Reply
I liked the sweating part, but it needs more sex.
[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.48 | 16-Sep-03/4:29 PM | Reply
Why no garlic?
[n/a] hobojo @ 166.94.9.208 > http://mulberryfairy | 17-Sep-03/10:18 AM | Reply
My roomate joined us for dinner and the next morning informed us as to his experiences over the gas he claims was from the garlic mushrooms. It was probably the dairy of lasagna.
[4] son of the moon @ 66.11.7.123 | 5-Jun-04/4:11 PM | Reply
ing weakens the verbiage. i want more immediancy from you
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