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A new beginning (Free verse) by hobojo

A common interest A random compulsion Passing the way home A never ending night A shivering sunrise Yuppie athletics Rain, and a fountain Whiskey, no pillows An attack in the kitchen No socks allowed Watching the river Walking under bridges Falling asleep to movies A romantic dinner for two Beating me in a miniskirt Cuddling in a small bed intoxicated by your kisses painting and lasagna no garlic mushrooms driving everywhere You watched me sweat I watched you sweat Then we sweat together An exchange of gifts And just one week together

peaceseeker 16-Sep-03/3:46 PM
I liked the sweating part, but it needs more sex.




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