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Part I: The Peach (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
Part 1: The Peach I walked away uncertainly, thinking “I guess that was that.” I returned to the rental car of our recklessness and contemplatively began eating the peach (actually a nectarine) you gave me. Ripe and spectacular as those of the NC foothills, where we both chopped away our thick roots years ago the peach burst its clear juices down my chin and arm. Leaning out of the car so I wouldn’t drip on the velour, I captured those escaping beads unwilling to let their nourishment be lost I finished the peach with a slurp throwing the pit into the bushes. I would tell you later how I may have planted a peach sapling (like the peach trees that grow, unappreciated and unfertilized, in landfills) in the state of NY in commemoration of our fruitful affair.

Up the ladder: Fried Mongolian Brains
Down the ladder: The last journey

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7396
Posted: September 1, 2003 8:32 AM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2003 8:32 AM PDT
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[8] SupremeDreamer @ 69.19.182.186 | 1-Sep-03/9:58 AM | Reply
blessed with 8.
[10] peaceseeker @ 24.198.66.113 | 1-Sep-03/2:25 PM | Reply
I liked your statement "I guess that was that," but I want to know more. What else were you feeling? Relief that it was over? Not wanting it to be over?
[n/a] <~> @ 64.252.166.116 | 1-Sep-03/8:15 PM | Reply
i do not believe tat it was the nourishment you would not let drip away, but rather, the sweetness.
yes?
[8] abecedarian @ 4.40.32.229 > <~> | 1-Sep-03/9:50 PM | Reply
subtle catch <~>
[n/a] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.158 > <~> | 2-Sep-03/10:24 AM | Reply
Yeah, you got me!
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