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The last journey (Free verse) by Milla
On my last journey you left me cold, trembling and confused Whenever darkness emerge I can still recall your bleeding touch that caused so much revolt in my crying veins that they had to rise in a relentless fiery storm. You made my golden eyes fade into shadows concurrently with your absence You used to be my shining star My true obsession I wanted you to save me, and show heaven you were mine But you had to disappear Halfway On my last journey

Up the ladder: Part I: The Peach
Down the ladder: Mourning Glory

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7400
Posted: September 10, 2003 6:32 AM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2003 6:32 AM PDT
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